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Post by Kiyomi on May 11, 2005 16:25:36 GMT -5
This one was my first decent drawing... its crap .. but bird crap... why because you see bird crap everywhere... so I was like what the hell.. I need to test out my y-gallery account anyways... I have a lot better ones... they are still in the pre-inking stages since I been busy with senior year.... So have at my crap... I know it sucks... ^_^ yaoi.y-gallery.net/view/11027 |
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Post by Kiyomi on May 11, 2005 16:27:36 GMT -5
#1 I f**ked his eyes...
#2 More Toboe-likeness needs to be done
#3 Smoother lines on the inking... my first inking job...
#3 kitty needs to be more kawaii....
# the body needs to be drawn alot better - his neck is HUDGE!!! God what was I thinking? LOL
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Post by Scarred Wolf on May 11, 2005 16:42:33 GMT -5
despite the fact that you and i are sworn enemies, i cannot let that affect my grading as a fellow artist. (without a scanner...  ) its pretty good. toboe looks cute, though the coloring is a little rushed it looks like, and the colors go in different directions. i like it, especially the cat- which is cute. its blocky too- looks funky. His bracelets too, each one gets smaller than the next. its not bad at all, but after your harsh critique, i expected way better. his hair is also undetailed, and his left arm (to our right by the cat) is kinda muscley after the elbow joint. its really cute though, despite it's flaws and whatnot. 6 or 7. |
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Post by Lady Amalthea on May 11, 2005 16:45:01 GMT -5
First off I don't like you.
but really it's not that bad.
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Post by DJ Toboe on May 11, 2005 16:47:33 GMT -5
First off I don't like you. Wow, you're a sweetheart aren't you? ;D Well, I think it's adorable. Only thing I see is coloring and his neck is too long  |
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Post by Lady Amalthea on May 11, 2005 16:48:44 GMT -5
Wow, you're a sweetheart aren't you? ;D but only to you and tooboe. |
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Post by DJ Toboe on May 11, 2005 16:53:57 GMT -5
but only to you and tooboe. Where's the love? lol, by the way. You have yet to be bitchy with me, so thank you  Maybe you have and I missed it/ignored it |
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Post by Lady Amalthea on May 11, 2005 17:24:45 GMT -5
Where's the love? lol, by the way. You have yet to be bitchy with me, so thank you Maybe you have and I missed it/ignored it don't worry you'll get your turn |
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Post by DJ Toboe on May 11, 2005 17:47:17 GMT -5
don't worry you'll get your turn Well that's pretty stupid since I've never done anything to upset you, but I can't wait! You seem quite well at talking behind my back already. Very mature for you Weren't we friends or something? I recognize your AIM name... anyways. Yes the pic is cute, but you have to remember this is one of the first pictures she's ever fully drawn and she's not overly-conceited about it. |
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Post by Kiyomi on May 11, 2005 17:47:57 GMT -5
honey please don't spam in my thread! Let her be a whatever type of person she wants to be... |
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Post by Scarred Wolf on May 11, 2005 17:49:50 GMT -5
honey please don't spam in my thread! its annoying, isnt it?  anyway, i can totally see this as like the sequel to devinfire's thread: "the argument of the rose petals: VOLUME 2!!!!" ;D (i wont be the culprit of course....) |
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Post by Lady Amalthea on May 11, 2005 18:05:49 GMT -5
Well that's pretty stupid since I've never done anything to upset you, but I can't wait! You seem quite well at talking behind my back already. Very mature for you Weren't we friends or something? I recognize your AIM name... anyways. Yes the pic is cute, but you have to remember this is one of the first pictures she's ever fully drawn and she's not overly-conceited about it. Oh honey it's not what you've done to me. It's what you've done to my friends (I will not give out real names you should know). That is something I will not stand for. No we weren't friends and it's not me talking behind your back you have to worry about. I get my stories from all the other wr cossplayers. Mature? You know what's very mature dj? Coming into my community on lj and telling a Hige crossplayer she looks like a d**e. A Hige crossplayer who happens to be a friend of mine. and tooboe I am sorry for spaming your thread I will stop now. Hopefully dj will too. |
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Post by Dark Kiba on May 11, 2005 18:07:36 GMT -5
i like it...it looks REALLY good |
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Post by devinfire on May 11, 2005 19:30:14 GMT -5
its annoying, isnt it? anyway, i can totally see this as like the sequel to devinfire's thread: "the argument of the rose petals: VOLUME 2!!!!" ;D (i wont be the culprit of course....) sigh... actually it's red petals. tooboe, the piece is actually not bad at all, although it's not drawn in the traditional wolf's rain way, it accomplishes what you wanted it to do, which what I think was being cute. interesting style of drawing... reminds me of cubism... anime cubism? |
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Post by Creator of Time on May 12, 2005 6:52:25 GMT -5
Despite the flaws that have been pointed out, this is a very good and very cute pic for one of your first ever finished ones. I like the concept of Toboe playing with the kitty, and overall, its just plain adorable. ^^
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